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"Morgan, I told you last time! If you don't eat with your utensils, You're not eating at all!"
Now you've done, Morgan. I've warned you for the past month That he'd get mad at you If you didn't eat properly. I told you.
You didn't listen, though. Of course you didn't Why would you, after all? I'm only looking after your well being.
But to you that's just me bossing you around, Isn't it?
"Yes, Daddy." Escapes your lips quietly.
"And use a napkin too. You're not a three year old." He adds harshly.

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the wool blanketIf only you could see me now in my bed, hugging my legs painfully tight and my nails digging into my porcelain hands, leaving marks -- just lost the Jergens campaign -- my chin's resting on my knees, which are covered by the wool blanket that you
asked to share with me at the Military Tattoo only we didn't sit together and I wasn't fond of you then but now I
find my nose buried in this blanket which scratches my nose but smells of memories and i remember that night on the bench curled up with my head resting on your chest, your arms holding me tight so the wool blanket
by ~WastedAttempts

.Memory."I think we need to move on because I don't think anythin' is gonna happen between us."
Wait. Stop. Rewind. Freeze.
My eyes reread the words until The black, size 10, Comic Sans MS font Is burned into my retinas I shiver My room's become cold It's too crowded in here I can't breathe The sound of the IM bleeps Travel through the dead air Almost bursting my ear drums My mouth is dry from the near hyperventilation The minty flavor of my toothpaste is now bitter on my tongue Hesitantly, I place my shaking fingers Back on the smooth keyboard &nb .Memory.
by ~WastedAttempts

Forgive MeI'm sorry that I Took your cell phone I know that It wasn't very nice
But you took My iPod away from me And that wasn't Very nice either
I know you'll forgive me When you get your cell phone back But first You'll have to give me back my iPod Forgive Me
by ~WastedAttempts

I Like YouGod, I hate you.
The way you smell of Mint and cologne It's enticing Me to do something Forbidden.
The way you play Your guitar Over the phone to me You sound like a Rockstar.
The way you have A logical answer For everything Worries me Greatly.
the way your voice Soothes me When I'm stressed Making my worries Disappear.
God, I like you. I Like You
by ~WastedAttempts

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You've started a warAim, shoot, bang, crash, Scream, fall, broken, smash. Sniped a bullet through his head, Leave him dying on a blood stained bed. Son of two, father of four, Thinking you could fix it, you've started a war.
"Prepare to all die, children and wives!" Out of this large population, nobody survives. "Our bombs hit them, sir, we've finally won," "The war has just started, son, its only just begun."
Hunting down one man, killing those in the way, Refusing to turn to God, shunning him away. Wiping out innocents, looking for one face, Discriminating against other You've started a war
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~SlipThruCracks Dec 29, 2004, 7:49:33 PM

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OHEMGEE THE BIG FIVE-OH

*jahg Jul 3, 2004, 6:32:05 PM

Well, I'm glad I popped in here to see the work you've been doing. I've read the five you have here so far, and found them to be very powerful pieces in the majority. They are also extremely personal pieces, and that makes them difficult to comment on constructively, as it's your experience that you're writing. It's clear that writing is cathartic for you, and that you get a good deal of enjoyment out of it - otherwise, why would you display your Art here for us to see?

Enough of me...

James